Here is an idea I'm trying out. I need motivation, as most of you know. I need a push, right off this timid little cliff I stand at the edge of. Frankly I've been writing for so long that I ought to have 17 books published by now. Yet, not one has been finished. So I'm setting a goal, an accountability goal for all of you to witness. I've got a couple books I'm working and this one really makes the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. So, I thought I would give you a sample...a teaser, if you will. However here's the catch, I need your feedback in order for this to work. Let it rip, a no holds barred kind of feedback. So here goes nothing!
"The wind blows fierce tonight. God is angry. I always associate the wind with something God is telling me. Its when I don’t listen that the wind whips around angrily. It is, ironically enough, a dark stormy night. Something bad must happen...its just perfect for a horror flick. I can almost hear the director yelling..."roll tape!!" I wonder what I could have done wrong to cause such a scary night. There are afternoons where the sun is hugging my shoulders and the wind wraps around me like a soft silk scarf. I know god is nuzzling up against me, loving me and sharing how much He loves me. Then there are times when I feel His tender nudge in the wind. The one that says don’t forget to do the right thing. Then there are nights like tonight where I feel His anger. I sense the thick pungent sting of guilt. There is a tiny boy scout in my stomach practicing his nautical knot tying. As the wind blows through my thin jacket I feel it, God is on to me..."
Psst...feedback...por favor...
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